Watermelon!!

  Juicy watermelon!!

Mmmmmm!!!! The water dripping down my mouth and my t-shirt.The magestice smells are like fresh fruit from the trees. Loud crunching around the room. Is that someone crunching their fruit in my ears? Looking closely at it Seeing the black and white pipis through the clear red ripe fruity.The taste of sweetness going around in my tastebuds. Ahh!! the smooth feels of the green rine but also yuck to eat rine.

                                  

By Te Ohomauri.

This is my writing about a watermelon and my drawing.

I really enjoyed eating the watermelon.

next time I need to make my drawing darker.